When I fall.

by nmdoza   Jan 6, 2010


When I fall I sink deeper and deeper.
But if I fall once again,
I'll climb up higher and higher.
And I'll reach up strongly,
So I can grab your arms fully.
And I won't have to let go,
Because you'll hold me so tightly,
As tight as I've held you when we used to stand tall.
I won't let love make me fall,
I'll no longer trip when love tries to make me.
And if love tries again, I'll grab on so quickly.
But if it so happens we let go,
And I lose my chance of it all,
I still wont let love make me fall.
And I'll just have to learn to stand without you.
Because I am never falling again, never sinking again,
Never falling deeper and deeper into broken pieces of ten.

-nmdoza.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Love feelings and a correct expression that comes from the bottom of the heart. Fascinating to see your lovely expressions and it sese nicely...

    Shirani

  • 14 years ago

    by nmdoza

    Thank you very much.
    i'll try to improve on that.

  • 14 years ago

    by morgan

    Very nice poem. i like what you are trying to get at. all i would say for u to work on is ur fluidity. at some parts in the poem is seems like you just cut off the end. still it is a very good poem. i give it a 4/5. :):):):):)

    Morgan :):):):):):):)

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