This was just plain out amazing.
I truly do love it, for real.
:))
you have some real potential in writing poetry, I cant wait to read more!
This just matter affactly caught my eye..And I was like Dayyummm This is a great poem!
haha.
Well keep writing Darlinn; I will keep admiring!
- Jess.

oh.. btw- You are defenitally going in my favorites!

and can you please comment one of my poems? Im lookin for advice from great writers!

Raj
What a awesome piece. I loved the form and looking at the reflecting swans. The words were just as good :)
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I know I've said this before...I just admire
the way you do shape poetry!!! Have tried it
several times but it has never come out right!
Loved the read..excellent piece :)

Excellent word choice! Very unique...love the shape and structure of this piece! Great job!

Excellent poem 5/5. i love the way you wrote it to make a duck on water. :)

"a courage to survive/that even grey shades couldn't conquer.

"a soul...hurt but pure./Will she swim out. "

Those were some of my favorite quotes from the poem. Cool story, maybe feels a little incomplete, but honestly that's just an opinion. Nice write.