Comments : From the shadows

  • 14 years ago

    by Tony

    Seriously good and very funny. It threw me off track to start with thinking it was a macabre piece until I got to the last couple of lines,
    Definitely a 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Very funny with a great surprise ending. Did he kill the spider? lol

  • 13 years ago


    I really liked the poem. Turning from feelings of dread to a light hearted laugh was great.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    LOL this was adorable and surprising. I loved it, thanks for the smile and sharing your humor with us

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is dark yet funny at the end when its,about the spider of course. I like the sharp, short sentences as it allures' to the spiders attack.

    Great job, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hahaha, you got me there.
    An arachnophobic made me forget all of my worries today...
    Suddenly she turns
    And sees him before her
    Dad, dad, she screams
    Please, catch this spider.

    these lines stood out.

    Well done