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Seriously good and very funny. It threw me off track to start with thinking it was a macabre piece until I got to the last couple of lines,
Definitely a 5/5.
Very funny with a great surprise ending. Did he kill the spider? lol
by FELTON PHILLIPS
I really liked the poem. Turning from feelings of dread to a light hearted laugh was great.
LOL this was adorable and surprising. I loved it, thanks for the smile and sharing your humor with us
This is dark yet funny at the end when its,about the spider of course. I like the sharp, short sentences as it allures' to the spiders attack.
Great job, Em
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
Hahaha, you got me there.
An arachnophobic made me forget all of my worries today...
Suddenly she turns
And sees him before her
Dad, dad, she screams
Please, catch this spider.
these lines stood out.