As i tried this form for the first time, i realized its not so easy to express with so little words yet you amazed me with the way you played with words. This is not like using heavy words but with simple words and ability to play with reader's mind..awesome.
Great write indeed

all the best and take care

A beautiful write Cindy... So much meaning in your these few words... and a wonderful job with the form. Loved it!

Love does have a passion and if that passion is missing, love turns to something that is not good at all. Well done.

Very well done Cindy, I'm still trying this form, can't seem to do it as wonderfully as you have. Absolutely perfect, in such few words you brought forth so much. I think you accomplished the challenge . :]

I loved the word choice and imagery. Great job adhering to the rules of the form. I loved the end........the feeling......

Great job!

You have described well the feelings of passion using this form that only allows
limited words..well done :)

Aia personally do not have a clue about this form, but can honestly say, due to the depth of it's meaning, that you are trully blessed with an enormous tallent.
No style or form seem to escape your beautiful mind and heart.I absolutely loved it.
Keep up the great work my friend.
Paul...

Special, I've never read this kind of poem before.
To say things with so little words is an art.
Thanks for sharing.
Take care

A stunning write - I myself am pretty inept at forms (not that I've tried too many) so I always respect those who accomplish them so seemingly effortlessly.
All the very best.
Ben