Aquatic eyes - that's a lovely description and this is great work!

shobhana

I like that you're trying new things hun :) this was really good. Sad and something I can relate to but still well written. *hugs* Nik

This would indeed be an accurate way to describe how being without the significant other can affect you...loneliness drizzling from aquatic eyes..very well put, Temps. This kind of grief can drag you down to the depths of hell, if you don't fight it.

You were always popular on this site, but I feel you are now beginning to really blossom with your poetic skills:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Fantastic Temps... Love the form that you have so well penned... :) Great job!

Loneliness drizzles
Aquatic eyes

Loved those lines. It gives a touching image.
Liked the form too..well done.

Temps
Beautifully penned. Wonderful form.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Beautiful word choice. Nice job on this form!