This was beautiful, definatly feelings that are easy to relate to having. Nicely done Olwin.

Very nice, Olwin. It feels good coming back and reading you once again.

shobhana

Very nice, Olwin. It feels good coming back and reading you once again.

shobhana

This is such a sweet, tender loving write..I
can feel the warmth and the softness of love.
Very nice :)

This is how I feel with my love! Such a simple, sweet yet poignant poem.

Olwin
What a beautiful poem. What a wonderful place to be.

Yes I love you, yea and more,
you have opened my hearts door.
Made a flame burn inside me,
close to you I want to be...

I really loved this stanza. What a wonderful feeling when someone lights that flame.
Excellent job!
Love
Cindy

This was truly beautiful. i'm glad i came back to check and see if you wrote more poems :D

i'm not sure if you know or care, but the last line in the 2nd stanza had 8 syllables where-as every other line had 7. but it was still amazing!
~Kuro

Great job with his one! "you have opened my hearts door. Made a flame burn inside me..."
:) would you please read/comment on mine? "the morning sun"

This is so beautiful. Very pleasant to read that captures the heart and eyes with effortless grace. Well done, kel.