Sinking venom to my veins
like a malice wolf
obscuring limbs.
I offered him charity
on silver platter
though he isolated
his heart in tombs
of greed.
^^^
Mel this part stood out to me. My favorite part !

He; a Shadow.
and I, no longer a Silhouette.
^^^
Loved this ending!

Wonderful job on the challenge ans such an eye catching title too.

Excellent read

I can not pick a favorite part. It was uniquely penned. Great imagery, word choice, use of metaphors, flow and structure.

This piece was thought provoking and seemed to have little pieces of wisdom thrown in here and there amongst the metaphors and vivid imagery. Combines with the clever, articulate word choice made this piece excellent!

You have such a distinctive style of writing and never cease to amaze me. This was no different. Imagination was definatly there, I was amazed by 'lilac stars' I immediately fell in love with this poem from the start. Its definatly a challenge to pick one favorite part, I couldnt stop reading. Nicely done .

I have to say that this poem was truly beautiful and thought provoking. I love the use of imagery and the flow of the poem is amazing. Great job.

^Pandora's box was
tragedy. ^

You need to either say tragic or A tragedy. It doesn't make sense how it is right now.

I agree with illu :"D
a hundred procent
you are amazing.