by Dreamofolwin
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Excellent. This poem is short but to the point, and conveys your message very well. I liked it because of that Sylvia. The tongue is indeed a dangerous weapon... and your words tell us this. A strong, powerful write that conveys so much. We need to watch how we use this little member of our body, (the tongue) Well expressed. |
by Meena Krish
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How true and very well penned. Some people |
by Cindy
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Sylvia |
by Ingrid
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It takes a certain kind of breed to believe wicked lies, Silvia. |
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So true, well done need I say more. |
by Rachel RTVW
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Very powerful Senryu. Great job adhering to the rules of the form! |
by shobhana kumar
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Love this piece, Sylvia. And this style. Very profound! |
by anand singh
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To get the message out clearly, we sometimes don't need a hundred words.In just a few powerful ones, you've got the message accross. |