Comments : Chaos (Senryu)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Excellent. This poem is short but to the point, and conveys your message very well. I liked it because of that Sylvia. The tongue is indeed a dangerous weapon... and your words tell us this. A strong, powerful write that conveys so much. We need to watch how we use this little member of our body, (the tongue) Well expressed.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true and very well penned. Some people
    just love to poke into other's life & create
    chaos..good write!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    Nice job on this form. A very strong message your words have conveyed.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    It takes a certain kind of breed to believe wicked lies, Silvia.

    Normal people shrug their shoulders when they hear gossip and evil things being said..one ear in, other ear out..and there are some who relish that kind of talk and even actively help to "spread the word" so to say.

    I believe there is good and bad in everyone, but some people are very weak and easy to influence..and prone to reprehensible behaviour, yes indeed.

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    So true, well done need I say more.

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very powerful Senryu. Great job adhering to the rules of the form!

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Love this piece, Sylvia. And this style. Very profound!

    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    To get the message out clearly, we sometimes don't need a hundred words.In just a few powerful ones, you've got the message accross.
    A wonderful Senryu.
    Well done my friend.
    Paul...