I like how you put across the emotions into this poem. It must have hurt for you to write this piece.

You'll think and you'll think until your head hurts. Then you will wonder which one was worse.
Being with me and having our fights, or sitting alone and thinking the mights?
^^^
Even though we fight in relationships, after break ups,ironically we often would miss all the silly fights we had.

Your convlusion will come, it will come it will be nothing new.
Just the same things i'm thinking, while thinking of you.

^^^
I love how you end this, nice way to end this 'break-up' poem.

Perhaps you should write in stanzas to make it easier to follow, over all very good job!

I luv this 1 .. its really good ;)

Well done. Very strong writing

So true so well written and thoughts on everyone's minds after a split from the heart .Well done i tuely enjoyed this it in my favourites .

5/5.

Short and sweet... I love it.

Thanks for commenting on my poem!

Pretty sure you just described my breakup.
hah love this poem, it flows really well

5/5. really great write! its something that almost everyone can relate to. keep up the great work!

5/5. really great write! its something that almost everyone can relate to. keep up the great work!

5/5. really great write! its something that almost everyone can relate to. keep up the great work!

5/5. really great write! something almost everyone can relate to. keep up the great work.

Once again you have shown us how increasingly amazing your writing abilities are !
I am anxious to watch your talent develop & hopefully be a part of it through comments .....Jim The Man Within....5/5

This has to be one of my favorite poems(: i love the flow of the words

Wow, just a amazing poem 5/5 :)

Amazing line of thots.... Ur poetry just flows.... I loved the emphasis on rhyme...