Couple small typos but nothing worth complaining about. I like the title to me its about letting go of what you used to love and need. Sometimes in order to grow and move forward we have to accept some pain and hardship and move on. Nicely done 5/5 p.s. could you please vote my poem :) thanks

A very nice poem.. Well written & truly felt 5/5

A very nice poem.. Well written & truly felt 5/5

This is an amazing poem. 5 for originality 5 for flawless flow and 5 for delivering the emotion

5>>>>>>>>>>>>

Great poem!!! The emotion was amazing!!! 5/5

I had to read it more than once to under stand it but yea i love it
fav line " a distant reality to this nightmare of a world" 5/5

I had to read it more than once to under stand it but yea i love it
fav line " a distant reality to this nightmare of a world" 5/5

I had to read it more than once to under stand it but yea i love it
fav line " a distant reality to this nightmare of a world" 5/5

The sun hides secrets you'll never even know....i liked that line alot, very good but still very sad, your an amazing writter

Good write

Beautiful!!

"The sun hides secrets you'll never even know."

^^ I love this line. Great write!!