I liked how the time kept increasing. I can really relate to that. You stay up all night looking at your phone and clock seeing the time and it seem like forever when that one person is on your mind. I have insomnia so I'm always up wishing someone was next to me. I haven't written a song in a long time but I felt this one was really well done. Everything flowed well and was easy to understand. I'm sure alot of people can relate to what you're saying. Nice work dear. Nik

This was probably the longest poem i have read on this site, but i was intrigued all the way through.. the time factor was a nice recurring aspect. I like this poem alot, so keep up your work, your going on my favourite list

Wow. honestly, wow. this was so unbelieveably amazing that i can't even come up with any words that would create a complete sentence. this was so heartbreaking and even worse, i feel like this every day. i'm going through this feeling every night. i don't fall asleep until sometimes 5am. it's amazing when you read things and realize that you're not alone. great job with this one! i always love you writing! :)

Wow, you always write the best poems i see on this website. (Y) Please keep writting these great poems. 5/5 :)

Omg loves it n I can relate to it great job pplease check out some of my poems n comment n vote thanks !

Wow this poem was quite long, it shows that you put a lot of time and emotion into it!
I enjoyed reading this piece very much because the flow worked rather nicley and insomnia is something which i can sadly relate to, I could not however describe the feeling as good as you have here so amazing job =]

Reading this makes me wonder what kind of spirit you are,
You will be bound to being a famous songwriter someday
5/5

Very long and really great Song/Poem! Excellent Work! 5/5 for you and keep it up the good work always!

-giegielove-

Beyond incredible... the way you kept the flow going throughout the whole poem, aswell as the rhyming scheme. This poem kept me captivated up until the end.

thank you so much for he incredible read, and i would love for you to check out some of my stuff
Jessie