Comments : Candlestick Hearts

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This to me either speaks as general love or the loss of love. Either way, your emotions are in place here & have a special love quality to it & flows. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Guess thats what we get for lighting candles at both ends,
    Scars on hearts from past loves always impossible to forget,

    ^^ Ya know, this is how you know someone is a damn good writer with lines like these...those two were definitely my favorite from this piece! One, because I can relate. I'm dating someone but can't forget about my ex no matter how hard I try. And two, the lighting the candle at both ends was a good metaphor. I loved it!

    Your writing is my favorite :) Your words, your style, everything about it is absolutely amazing!

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I just added this poem to MY FAVORITES. it was the most heartfelt and honest thing i've read in a long time! i feel like i relate to every word you write in this one. it was so amazing and relieving to hear someone else say the words that i can't always get across on my own. this was purly beautiful!! amazing job! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Su

    Beautifully put! =D

  • 14 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    Very well done, and congratulations on being featured :)