A very powerful piece of work. I can feel the incredible emotion penned throughout.

Well done.

Michael

This is really sad, a little hard to follow at times, but really emotional, you should fix up the order and flow a bit...overall very nice

This poem is filled with understanding and pain. At the same time it seems like the narrator wishes the other had been stronger. Great imagery and choice of wording.

It shows true emotion and it makes the reader feel like they are there watching what is going on, like they can stop it but not before its to late.

Your poem gave me chills, I can relate to the addiction part and the constant cravings that it causes. Very cathartic and hauntingly honest.

WoW I really loved this It was Great!!