Comments : Breakfast in Bed

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    LOL well done Sylvia

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That will teach him to ever want breakfast in bed again. -=giggles=-
    It was well-written and I like your sense of humor.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This was funny! I really had a good laugh with
    this! GOod job :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on the challenge Sylvia....LOL

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Nicely done with the challenge. somehow you take some random words and are able to use them all in one poem that makes sense. Ringo , i'll never forget what that means now, lol. least you taught me something. great job .

  • 15 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Poor Ringo, did he have to wash the linen as well?
    Word flow could have been better I think.