Really good poem. The flow was good and I could relate to it. I pisture everything you're going through while I'm reading it. 5/5

This was a very good poem and the emotions came through quite well! The flow seems to work nicely and from the length of the piece it shows that you spent a while writting it =] really great job it was a good read!

I have read this poem, not once but twice. I read it once to see catch the flow, I read it twice to feel the emotion. Righteous write. Liked the usage of words in some parts and loved the anger it has... very awesome.