Give it time Nik and you will know real love and it will come to you when you least expect it and from someone you may have overlooked. (smiles)

This was extremly beautiful =]
Your flow was perfect and you captured me futher with each stanza! Amazing poem 5/5 Im surprised this hasnt gotten more reviews

Who wouldn't want to experience this happiness & feeling of true love. you will find it someday, just let it come to you. beautiful write.

What I really like about this poem is that people really tend to have a problem admitting this, and it's such a reliefe to read that you're not the only one out there who feels this way. I also love your choice of words, and the way you described things. Your words danced right off of the page, 5/5!

mandy :)

This write made me shiver, Nik. Absolutely divine. not beautiful, not wonderful, i mean divine, with two lines underlined beneath it.

All of us want to feel that.. i especially liked this stanza. It hit home..

"No more imaginary lullabies
sang to keep the demons
away. I want real arms to
shelter me, real lips to kiss me
real eyes to gaze into.
Fiction can't remain the
path I walk on..."

A definite 5 for me, girl..

Aww what a cute poem. . . love sure is magical. . <3

No more imaginary lullabies
sang to keep the demons
away. I want real arms to
shelter me, real lips to kiss me
real eyes to gaze into.
Fiction can't remain the
path I walk on...

This last verse is the one that really stands out for me, for it used to be my feelings
at one time...beautifully penned! I understand
your feelings.

Original and well written, the honesty of the words helped the words flow effortlessly.