Great poem, love the rhyme scheme and the pace. :)

I love this poem! Keep up with the writting =]

THIS IS AWESOME ! love it !

Goodbye child no more hugs
hello crack hello drugs
wow I guess that kind of sums it up.
A perfect piece,Its short,the flow and rhyming are excellent, It amazing how some
one else can actually feel the same exact
way I feel. Its small world 5/5 I will definly
check out alot more of your poems. It amazes me how you can write something beautiful about something so ulgy. try to
bear with my bad spelling I can spell for jack
sorry

Flow is so different... its a good write

How it goes.
Well-written!
5/5