Very nicely done, does not at all seemed forced. i know several times I see these forms and they are so forced because the rhyme and strict rules but this one was not at all. I loved it.. you did a great job .

Raj, you did a good job with form and the topic you choose to write about. Well done.

Spring smothered by concrete,
limp wings, desperately plead,

Ohhh..this is just a vivid image that comes
into the mind! Well done with the challenge my dear!