Another amazing love poem from you (: I liked how your title sounded to me. It's contradicting meaning somehow made this piece even more intriguing. Love the use of words here, this shows that you don't have to have a huge pot of vocabulary to pen out such a lovely poem (: Keep it up!

I think that this was very touching and relatable. The beat was a little off for me, or maybe I just wasn't reading it the way you intended it to be read, I don't know. But it was very good poem with a great story line. Very unique. 5/5

You see,you had me from the title
Amazing,And just how it ends the same way it begins ,amazing rhyming ,,,
Love it
:)

I love the repetition. Great flow to it too. And not your typically love poem, but something really different.

I love the way you write and will certainly read more (you're added to my favorites now :D)

Greets!

Beautifully written, I enjoyed the rhythm. Very relatable, It definitely made me think about self worth and that if you aren't with someone who doesn't respect you they aren't worth the time. Inspiring (:

<3 he he