You really pulled me in with the first line, just loved it. the rest of it was amazing, awesome job on the form.

"splendid, seductive stars"

yes these stars are amazing and they do know how to seduce the heart.
Well done with the form challenge!

You've taken one of Gods creation and turn it into something so beautiful in only a few words.
The stars do mesmerize us from the begining of time.
An enjoyable read indeed.
Paul...