by Ndanileka Mar 5, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Afraid to close my eyes and sleep |
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Well written its good to see you writing about your inner demons you will see you are not alone in your battles, many of us do excactly the same. This was a good poem but i thought you could touch a bit more on the emotional side of things. Well done. Grant |
by SheenaMarie
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Really great write 5/5 |