I enjoyed reading this. In fact I have read it over many times. In lieu of enjoyment, you withdraw into yourself to avoid those feelings and the sun keeps on shining and doesn't seem to care. Well done.

I've deliberately avoided the sun
for a wink or more,
and not just for her summery vibe of
turquoise skies and pina coladas
that relinquish all my insecurities
into putty,
but she bares this heated glare
that prickles my skin
with an insatiable need to be loved
by anyone.

I like the way you have described the heat
as human and the feelings behind it..very well
penned!

I liked the word choice and the imagery. Nice job!

//and not just for her summery vibe of
turquoise skies and pina coladas
that relinquish all my insecurities
//
^^lovely imagery here...

I shy away from that big golden balloon
for fear of feeling
too alive or
too alone,
and as usual
she shines
with no concern for my malady

^^ these are such beautiful lines... so sad yet so profound and touching... beautifully written... these words speak so much of silence and solitude ... just loved them

brilliant write...

Melissa
You are one of the most amazing writers on this board - Indeed, that I've read on many a poetry board. You are such a strong, valliant writer. You should have a poem featured every week, as far as I'm concerned

Awesome piece :)
Congrats on the win!
Take care
Cindy

"I've deliberately avoided the sun
for a wink or more,
and not just for her summery vibe of
turquoise skies and pina coladas
that relinquish all my insecurities
into putty,
but she bares this heated glare
that prickles my skin
with an insatiable need to be loved
by anyone."

I love this part very well written. The poem itself has great structure. The ending word is a little awkward but it still fits. Great job!