A sorrowful situation you have penned here..
you took the reader step by step describing the place as well as feelings that it could all
be pictured in the mind..good write.

It is sad and a journey no one would like to make but must at times. I took that journey and your words reminded me vividly of it, especially the snow. Well done.

That is such a touching write... loved how you have presented the life from differnt perspective...

I'm filled with the sadness of this scene
for you see, his sister is my mother.
^^ this is so well penned... it touched my heart...

beautiful write...