Meena, nice work with the form. You captured the feeling of emptiness very well and conveyed it to the reader. Well done.

Wonderfully done... I know how difficult it was to search an internal rhyme... you seem to have done it effortlessly... :)

//No mercy till the end
pen is the only friend//
^^ loved these lines... well penned

Your poems are always originals. I think maybe the finest of imagery you are able to create. Well done Meena

Quite a vivid description of emptiness and heartbreak.
You've done a beautiful job with this form.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

A small amount of words that hold so much power and heart touching sadness.

"Emptiness dress the eyes
numbness settle, pain dies"

Wow. Such a great begining to a very truthful ending. I loved it. 5/5 -Cody

Nice rhymes...