Comments : Joy of Touch (Fibonacci)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very beautifully written Sylvia... loved the imagery of a tender rose :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Silvia,

    The Fibonacci format is very beautiful, somehow the way the lines are arranged ( amount of syllables) gives a certain power to the message.

    The content is one of joy for life, for the beauty of nature and I could not agree with you more..when you truly look at a rose and smell it's divine aroma, you cannot help but fall in love with this queen of flowers.

    Lovely work, deserves a nomination:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A absolutely beautiful write, I agree with Ingrid needs to be nominated

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A lovely picture you have painted..the picture
    of a flower who is queen of all flowers. Liked
    the word choices and you did really good with
    this form too!

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love the imagery and your word choice. I also find this form interesting and haven't seen it before. Nice job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Corinne

    A beautiful poem Sylvia. Congratulations!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cody B

    I'll have to agree with a lot of others. The image you drew in my mind as I was reading was beautiful. I'd like to someday write poetry like this. I'll probably have trouble but it seems you wrote with ease. Very well done and written. Good job on the win, it was definitely deserved! 5/5 - Cody

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    Awesome form....beautiful poem.
    A well deserved win :)
    Congrats!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by anand singh

    A thing of beauty in only a few words.Well done Sylvia.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Simple poem..nice