Lovely write... haen't tried this form yet...
the last line where the words are repeated sounds so powerful...

believe in yourself,
embrace it with enthusiasm, optimisim.
^^ very positive approach... loved it :)

Sylvia..you did a very good job not only with
the form but also you used it to spread a good message...hope, something this world
lacks at times. Well done!

Loved this, theres many ways to describe hope & you've done well. Maybe this is what I needed to read. Thank you for posting.

You made this seem so easy, Silvia, when I know it's not.

To have hope and faith in yourself and the future are essential, those who lose it are already dying...sometimes in their teens already.

Nice to see such an optimistic piece posted:]

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

This has to be one of the best poems Ive read in a while. Absolutely brilliant Sylvia! :) An inspiring message and an exceptional poem with the use of this form.. Bravo!

Sylvia
I love all the new forms you are introducing to the club. Guess I better get busy...LOL
Wonderful message in this one.
Great job!
Love Cindy