So much hurt, so much pain
We had so many hopes and dreams
It really is such a shame
Nothing is ever as it seems

*Very much true, loved how you worded it.

I love the way you expressed yourself in this poem and thought that you ended it very well too. I thought overall the poem was excellent and definitely 5/5!

I thought the poems also deserved a 5/5. :) Really good. This one really called out to me.

First loves are always like that..they leave a
lasting impression in our hearts..take care.