A creative form and brilliantly done. Lies are the most offensive of all . Good job

Lies are so easily spoken...true facts you have penned about lies. Good job with the
form :)

This is a very bitter poem, Silvia...someone must have hurt you badly.

Lies,
tear a heart apart, steal the grace.

^^
I found this to be the most important part of the whole verse. What you say is so true..once you find out someone has been lying, you can forgive them and move on from there, but they have fallen from that pedestal you had them on..and nothing can undo that damage.

I have found that in the virtual world people are even more decieving than in real life. You cannot see them, and therefore they can make you believe almost anything. Glad to have taken my distance from it all now;)

Take care, dear lady!

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia
I have never seen this form. I don't thinnk it is one I could do :) Your word you picked was perfect and so true. How many people hurt others with their falsehoods. Then go on about their lives like they are the innocent ones.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Interesting form and well done. Sadly to true.