I really like this work. the real meaning of life, in my opinion, is love. I totally agree with you. You write with nothing but truth, love it. 5-5

I can't say I liked this poem very much. Those are lines, each carrying it's own messege, while each line leads to another in a stream. The idea is unique, I give you that. This kind of poetry is a modern one, I get that. There are no rhymes, no structure, more like a story than a poem to me.

I'm sorry I'm so harsh, but this is my honest opinion. 3/5