Aah very nice, the ending just sums it up all too well. Very nice Jad.. keep it up.

Austin, nice work with the form and it once again proves that a few words can be used to convey a powerful message. Well done.

Austin
Nice job on the form. Leaving the reader with a tear.

WONDERFUL. I love this form and your poem. You have done a good job... Well done Austin :)

You are doing really well with writing form poetry and this too is very well written..good
job!