Very nicely done , just loved it & how courageous you are to try all these forms. They come out truly beautiful each time. Awesome.

Sylvia, this is so deep and heartwrenching lol. A sad write full of emotion and so well penned with a wonderful use of this form. Excellent! I loved it, Lol.

I like how every line started with "S" made the poem look more like a whole. Nice work. Nik

Sylvia
Wonderful job on this form. I could feel the sadness in each word penned.
Great job!
Love Cindy

This is a new form to me and I quite like this one. The poem itself is also a good read with strong descriptive words, well penned Sylvia.

Another interesting form. im glad you include the little paragraphs explaining it. it shows just how much work you actually put into this. or at least how much you know of poetic forms.

either way it was an enjoyable read :D

Peace runs away when grief has a hard grasp
upon us..very well written using this form!

I loved this piece the first time and it still makes me feelt he same the second time around. Congrats on the win :] very well done. Nik

Congrats on a well deserved win Sylvia :)

An emotionally charged piece well desreved win.
Paul...

Neet poem style... Im going to have to look more into all these styles of poems you write and start trying them myself.... just added you as a favorite poet

hope to see you read more of mine... thx