Raj
What a interesting piece. Love the imagery you have painted with your words.

I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny.

I loved this stanza. How sad it is to feel we have no smiles left for ourselves.
Great job!
Love Cindy

I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny

^Really loved this part as well. Thought it was very powerful & interesting the way it was worded.

Aprubly - AbrupTly.

Other than that just very well done, It's amazing how a few words , a short poem, can be so powerful and interesting. Very nicely done. :]

It is sad when we don't remember losing our smiles and dreams that we had. Well done.

Penned quite nicely, very original wording.
Might want to run the spell checker to clear up a couple of misspelled words, otherwise a nice read.

Very well done Raj. A powerful short poem that you have so well penned... with excellent, unique word choice. Loved it! This my favourite part also...Lol.

"I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny"

Great job!

Its like becoming a stranger to ourselves..that we don't even know who we are and what we have lost. A deep write of
sadness..take care.