Oh Dear,
You've done such a beautiful job!
Well done
Loved the rhyming.
not forced at all
Take care hunny!(:

Perfect!

To me this is a poem that allows the reader to kind of relate it to something in their own lives, which is what we all try to accomplish. The best poems are the ones that have room for different enterpretations and not lock the reader down and force him/her to draw the same conclusion as the author.

I really like this poem a lot, couple of words in there that made me a laugh a bit, but that's just me and it has nothing to do with the poem, so pay no heed to that.

I'm thinking about adding you to my favorite list as clearly you have a lot of great poems I have yet to read.

--ares