Hey there, I like this one. I like the concept of it very much and you expressed yourself well. But to make the poem more serious I think you should maybe use less one question mark and maybe make the writing look nicer in general by separating it into stanzas (paragraphs). I enjoyed it a lot! :)

Very very good point. Loved the concept. Life is nothing more than questions and even if u do end of with an answer...it only produces more questions so i completely understand this. great job.=]

victoria

Bravo , great poem . i get every single question but unfortuately i have no answer :(
we keep asking about something happen daily in ur our lives but in vain ...no convincing answers.
5/5 well done

Good flow in both word and idea and no I don't know either.