Creeeeeaks, craaaaacks.
Ha. Can see it, can hear it, can know it.

The art of showing without even implying. You know it well.

...and your vision 'over everything'...
what a treat!

Omg ur last 2 lines..are absolutely gorgeous ...and the whole piece was worded with words that gave me a thrill..I was so enjoying this one as well..

u do have this special style..am having a liking for ur work..such a very talented member you are..

this

I go outside, the concrete step and vinyl siding sweating with dew,
And I can smell the charge in the air,
Smell the pause between two rain
Showers
^^^^was my fav...the words u chose are no bet words for TRUE poetry and u made a gr8 job penning this down

5/5
keep writing

...and true beauty in every line and image
in this poem...
'~)