Comments : Season of Renewal (Alliteration)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Another beautiful poem about spring, but now looking at it more in depth, with more stunning descriptions & a different view. It is the season of renewal. Very well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Great job with the form as well and the imagery you use is just astounding and it made it that more pleasant to read. Also I could practically see all the plants and trees in bud. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    A very lovely poem with a lot of images I'm sure we can all relate to. Nice work. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    It is quite a vivid description of one season leaving and another taking it's place.Ahhhh, Spring, that beautiful crisp smell of fresh air, seeing trees with buds starting, just a beautiful thing.And you've portrayed it so beautiful in this warm and wonderful piece.
    Good job Sylvia.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sylvia
    I loved this poem the first time I read it. Everytime I read it I love it more. Excellent entry for our Think Spring contest. Congrats on placing.

    Tranquil trees, limbs no longer bare,
    covered with bashful buds, opening with care,
    lazy leaves awakening there.

    I love the word choices in this stanza. bashful buds. Made me smile thinking of a shy tree :)

    Fragrant flowers blooming,
    radiant rainbows of color booming,
    a festive feast for the eyes, unassuming.

    Your imagery so vivid I could see the flowers and colors in my mind.

    Beautiful butterflies flitting to and fro,
    dashing, dancing through the air all aglow.

    I miss seeing the butterflies on the flowers so this really brought back many spring and summer memories for me.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy