We do tend to keep our real self hidden from others, perhaps fear of trusting them or being hurt. I was lucky enough to know a special person that I could be the real me with. Loved all the images and the message in your words. Well done.

Excellent message and I loved it. As already said we do tend to keep our real self hidden. Good imagery and emotion. Keep writing.

An awesome poem you have here, loved the questions in the beginning, very thought provoking. A great message indeed.

Walah
Beautiful poem with a wonderful message.

We often don't appreciate what we have,
Unless it slips or is about to fly away.
Why is it that we wish to have a sunny weather,
When the sky suddenly starts to turn grey?

WE get so busy with going through lifes motions we sometimes forget to give thanks for what we do have till it is almost to late.

Learning to see life's beauty,
Is most clear when the ugliness prevails.
We learn the invaluable lessons,
That are conveyed through life's tales.

How true your words ring dear.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

5/5.A write, truly from the heart.We all evolve after facing hardships in our lives,and start appreciating the beauty which life has offered us.A beautiful message.Keep writing.God bless.