Comments : Melas Oneiros

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned! I love the picture painting imagery. Your word choice was articulate. You used enjambment well. I love your creativity and the fact that you added the little translation at the end. Excellent job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Firstly congrats on the front page win Mel ... very deserving hun.

    I am always impressed by the uniqueness of your writing. You have such a way with words that allows them to not only impress the reader but make the reading memorable.

    You captivated my attention from the beginning word and held it all the way through.

    Loved the uniqueness ... the word choice ... and how you paused at the perfect times.

    Wonderfully done Mel !

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I agree a very well deserved win. You had really awesome interesting imagery throughout. Stale dream catcher was brilliant, as well as the raindrops becoming stone, there are too many to name that I found really well written. The flow was great & I couldn't stop reading. A brilliant piece of great quality.

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    I just read this book! 'Since I don't have you' and honestly it has so much to do with greeek I could do nothing but think of you the whole time.anywhoo my point being: you incorporate so much greek language into your poetry its just bloody amazing.and so like so diffeerent .really out of this world ,weird but beautiful;_