This poem holds heartaches and this deep pain which can't seem to be erased..a painful read that touches the heart..

I don't have time to say anything productive, so suffice to say, in the most subjective and non-critical way possible: I really like this poem, it does something to me. :)

I've been in that land you speak of, I walk it then and now. Beware of grasping for those things of joy and happiness that we think are our savour because it ends up being 10x more evil when they are gone. Just a tip from one that lives among the ash of lives past.

I really can relate to that. I feel as if im in that land in which this poem describes. Hopefully one day ill be whole again but until that day ill just wander through the days. Great poem :) <3 BrokenBella aka Joclyn

I can really really relate to that, I've been there its not fun and your poem reminds me of that pain. Amazing poem <3 darknessfalling

This is really fantastic. I love the darkness and the mood of the piece.

I love this poem. As Darknesss loving princess this is the land I live in.