A very talented poet is exactly what you are. It seems like your in a stale mate here.

I have a poem called beautiful taint, its a bit of a mood lifter, it you'd like, I'd dig it if checked it out.

You need to feature this Ashley...awesome.

Such a sad poem && very impressive, I find it really hard to incorporate my emotions into lines that rhyme and it seems you've mastered that. 5/5

Dean-x

You had done it all. Nothing to talk about it. Great expression.

You had done it all. Nothing to talk about it. Great expression.

I love this one...it reminds me of ....well me:(

I can feel the pain in your every single word that u write... i can feel really..
my fav line is

Dark places, cold stars my shattered heart left to be sewn

it makes me remember about past... i really enjoyed reading this piece.. welldone 5/5

I understood the last line to a T. because of the fact that when i am upset, i cn't talk or there is nothing to really talk about. That poem pretty much nailed me against a wall. nice work!

Beautiful poem

Love it!