That was really good, it spoke to me on a personal note. Kepp up the good work!

Yaki :] Your every poem always holds beauty and reflective meaning. You have a lot of potential in you my dear young poet. However just a little careful the way you structure them. For instance, in my humble opinion, i dont think it was necessary to captilize most of the words within the poem. Just my opinion though.

I like it :-) though the form of stanzas really confused me..
and I suggest you correct the capitalized letters in the lines.

Keep it up =)

I thought it was amazing.

5/5