Wow...i loved this poem. so vivid and so emotional. wonderful job.
truly powerful.

victoria

The last two lines are so sad in this. I got two images from this, a woman lost and a butterfly. Well done.

Very descriptive. You did very good in writing this one.

Your styles never stay the same I liked this one its open to possibility then withdrawn into crumpled paper well done.

AWSOME job on this poem...I really love your writing style. I will be looking out for your stuff, and check out mine...I hope you like it.

I'm not sure that i understand what you where thinking when you wrote this but i loved the wording ... it was beautiful.

I feel where you are coming from in this, it's beautiful. I especially loved the lines,
"As hope left her body cold,
Tears froze in sad blue eyes"

Nice writing style as well (:

Fantastic job on this piece, I like it for many reasons: 1.) It is very descriptive. "Tears froze in her sad blue eyes" I like that you explain what color her eyes were, some don't focus on tiny details like that. 2.) Words that would normally not rhyme do in this piece. Stars, desire. I really enjoyed this poem. Great job :)

This is beautiful and powerful. Very descriptive which makes it much more readable.

Well done, Em

Wow Wording are so great and rhythm is so perfect ! Love the last time ! * love is just a lie*