Awesome, kind of describing a fire being put out, at leasts that is my interpretation.. you did a nice job ending the poem with a strong antonym, it tied in perfectly & made a lot of sense.

Austin, you did good with the form and your poem. Fire that burns and water that puts it out. Nice.

Ahhh..fire and water. You did really good describing fire then bring in water to dampen it..well done with the form :)

I like how you make the transition from fire to water. As big as a fire maybe, water will always overcome this flames. Nice topic to go with the form. Keep it up.

Loved the flow from fire to water...
well written :)

Water and fire are always known as opposites, and the way you wrote this was clever. It was a smooth transit from fire to water.

Like it so much.

Keep it up !

Sharp thinking.. making together two opposite things.... smart writing...