Comments : Nocturne

  • 13 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem has a unique messege to deliver - the balance in our lives. Why can the nature keep it balance, while we can't keep ours. The poem is offcourse of modern style, but I already got the idea that it's the style you write. Liked the questions you raised at the end, really made me think. Again this was more than a story than a poem, but a very bold messege was delivered. Just because I liked the way you wrote it 5/5