Beautifully written. If you're trying to make this a song, I dunno if it would work as well as it does just as a poem. I hope the person your trying to give this message to you hears this. This is very good, I loved it from the picture, word choice, flow of the poem. I have an older brother myself and he was always there for me, although we fight, he's still there for me, but I dunno if I'd write something like this for him haha but anyways I can relate to this poem very much. Easily 5/5 for me.

I would categorize this more of a song. But I when I used to write songs before I wrote poetry. Everything is nice, happy go lucky in this.
"In my heart is always a spot for you"

Very very heartfelt stuff, you paint a picture with such simplicity. I can only be envious of. Great work though.

The lyrics of this song could stand on their own ,though I so love to hear heart song sung