I like this piece a lot...descriptive. Kinda makes me wish I was back in Hawaii but unlike the poem mine wasn't a dream haha. Good work! keep it up

Yes our dreams takes us to special and peaceful places..I liked the place which your poem took me to..a nice read :)

Your imagery is so vivid, yet you use such simple language. My favourite thing to write about is nature and you just encapsulated me completely with the most blissful idea... i.e. paradise. Great work. and hope to see more in the future. 5/5