Comments : Ultimate Gift

  • 13 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    An excellent writing.... 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Be the difference,
    your voice can introduce light
    and shatter lost blackness.

    claps :). This is realy well written, has a deep darkness and a crystal clear msg at the same time

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this poem, I know that there have been some days where I would have needed someone like this, someone to open their arms and hearts

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    If you can't find happiness in a to-day
    then there's no way anyday

    =) I liked your poem

  • 13 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    It is suitable nowadays because of what is happening around the world are starting to fill with chaos, natural calamity. Everyone needs kindness and care.. your poem is like an inspiration and eye opener hope people could this piece.