She's beautiful

Limitless beauty rips through
time into a moment in which
would last forevermore.
^Ooh. Great intro. I like. (:

Blue overflows the skies as I
inhale perfection carved
carefully through her face,
forming purity through lips that
are limited by words,
and can only be described
as exquisite.
^Haha, I'm enthralled by the imagery that you have put into this piece. I don't think you could have said it in a better way then this. Well done.

My heart pumps as electric
shocks trace through the morning
and caress my head with
boxing gloves held by
her hands.
^Hmm. this, I think, takes a lot away from the beauty and mystic feeling you set before, I'm not sure if this stanza is relevent..but honestly..I'd remove the whole stanza. It seems misplaced to me.

Her voice sooths the silence,
^soothes

Granting promise of something
Differing within immeasurable
Quantities of a feeling of more.
^I don't think the second "of" is needed, and it'd make the poem easier to read without it.

Her eyes radiate absolute divinity,
As the moment, then, marks
Eternity. She is what beauty
Would be, were it an intensified
Mixture of stars and galaxies,
Brought together with a feeling,
Intangible, though felt as real
As the morning light brushing
Softly against one's face. She holds
a beauty felt as real and comforting as
Rain dancing amongst elegance
In her presence.
^Geez. I really love how you word this. It's just majestic. I'm getting lost in it XD

Her ravishing rarity captures the
Absolute peak of what it
Means to be refined as they
Engrave truth within time.
Thoughts echo distantly, and all
I can remember are those words.
She's beautiful.
^Absolutely wonderful ending to a magnificent poem. I included a few things that I felt could be impoved, but beside that, I think that this poem is just..lovely.
Incrediably done.

Alright I decided to just pretend it was organized and not worry about the sloppy free form and undeveloped lines. I like the way you write and the way you use your words, but the way you put them down in a weird sort of way kind of takes away from your great ability to write. I personally think its a challenge to make poems with structure and perfection then to just throw it down in any way with no form at all. Its a great piece, but I'd wish for you to consider structering your work better and maybe putting forth a little more effort. I gave this a 5/5 but theres room for potential definately.