Comments : KNIFE

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I absolutely love this poem.

    I'm gonna take it and cut so deep, then I'm gonna smile.
    oh, how i wish you was here with me. it be worth a while.
    but since you're not here this letter is for you.
    just know the i love you and ill be watching over you.

    Love this stanza. Trying so hard to keep your promise, to stay away from the knife. But the pain is to much, you cant handle it anymore & you say you're sorry and that you'll watch them from above.

    I love this poem, emotion runs through. Wanting that blade, needing it like no other, and not being strong enough to say no.
    Flowed so well.
    Amazing job
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by marina14

    I love this poem i can relate to it in so nmany ways