The imagery you have painted with your words is heart wrenching. To see everythng being effected from the oil spill breaks my heart. All the wild life and the livlyhood of so many. This will still be effecting things for 100's of years.
This is such a great piece of work.
You've captured such anger and resentment. Nature is so innocent, and this poem shows how ugly man kind can be.
A beautifully horrific image comes across in every line.
5 years ago
Mankind's to thank for this, you definitely were able to get that through to the reader in a pretty startling way, actually. Now I'm frowning :(
Still, I like this - A well-penned eye-opener